Title: Visiting Lilly
Author: Toni Allen
Series: N/A
Pages: 322
Date Published: September 2014
Publisher: Booktrope Editions
Format: ebook
Genre: Mystery
Source: Goddess Fish Blog Tours
Synopsis:
D.I. Jake Talbot is a burnt-out British detective given a second chance to believe in love, friendship and the transcendent essence of the human experience. When he investigates a seemingly innocent visitor to a residential care home for the elderly he uncovers a dangerous family hiding a forbidden romance that mysteriously crosses the boundaries of time. The deceitful family does all they can to prevent Talbot from discovering their secrets surrounding an unsolved murder, family betrayal; at the core of which is a keenly intelligent, though somewhat mentally challenged young man who is fixated on an elderly woman being held captive by her own grandson. Talbot sets out to right the many wrongs done to the blameless, and in turn, rediscovers his own humanity.
~Guest Post!~
Charting Characters by Toni Allen
Did you do the charts of your characters?
If so, did that help you create them?
When I start working with a new character,
after a short while, I have a firm idea as to what their sun sign is. I don’t
erect a full astrological chart as that would make my character too much like a
real person, because I’d become restricted by the placements of outer planets
which move very slowly and therefore govern entire generations. Also, if I
erected a full chart for a given date in a given year, with a specific birth
location, I wouldn’t be able to guarantee that my character’s Moon would be in
the sign I’d like to attribute to him or her. So I cheat, and create an
imaginary chart in my head based on certain traits I’d like my characters to
portray.
Mainly I focus on
the sun sign, because that rules the ego, and with fiction I’m creating an
identity. By knowing the sun sign of my character I can emphasise one or two
traits and use it like a rhythmical pulse, making sure that my character
periodically displays specific behavioural patterns.
I expect you’re
now wondering what birth sign my main protagonist Detective Inspector Jake
Talbot is. He’s Taurus, the bull. Taureans can be incredibly stubborn, and
Talbot is both dogged and determined. Once he has his mind set on something he
keeps at it, working long into the night because he can’t let something go
until the job is finished. He’s always thinking that he’ll have just one more
cup of coffee and a fag, and then he’ll go to bed.
Another strong
Taurean trait is that they experience life through their fingers tips, always
touching and stroking objects to connect with them. They like to bond with
people via touch as well, so Talbot has to be very aware around Frankie Hayward
who is the exact opposite and finds physical contact, such as a woman giving
him a hug, difficult to accept.
Talbot collects
antiques, and Taureans can be dreadful hoarders and often amass vast
collections of various items. They hate to throw anything away. Even though
Frankie Hayward is very different from Talbot they have great similarities at a
core level, which is why these two opposites start to bond once they open up to
each other. As soon as I saw what Frankie looked like I just knew that he was a
Scorpio. Dark eyes, dark hair and with a way of staring that bores straight
into you, he had to be a Scorpio. By nature Scorpios have strong introvert
tendencies and are capable of spending long periods of time on their own. They
explore any subject they’re interested in to an extreme level and can be
obsessive.
All of these
traits I wove into Frankie’s character, including Scorpio’s sensitivity to random
physical contact and their ability to love deeply and addictively. As for Lilly, the
woman who Frankie is in love with, well, she was born under the sign of Libra,
quite simply because Libra rules classical beauty.
~Try an Excerpt!~
‘I’ve been warned
off, Jake.’
‘Sir?’
‘Had a phone call from that twit Weissman, about an hour
ago.’ He nodded in response to Talbot waving the coffee jar. ‘He told me I was
making too many waves, asking too many questions, helping you out too much.’ He
pressed his index finger firmly on the manila folder. ‘Keith McKenzie’s school
reports that you requested.’ His lips curled into a snarl. ‘I won’t be able to
offer much more. Damn people.’
‘May I ask who these damn people are, sir?’ Talbot asked,
hoping Bailey knew more than he’d gleaned from Weissman, but the answer was
disappointing.
‘All I know is that they’re a psychiatric unit connected to
the MOD, and have a lot more clout than I do.’ He frowned, sat down and picked
up Lilly’s photo again. [***] ‘And all for a bit of skirt.’ Opening his
fingers, he let the picture float to the table. ‘Putting you on this case,
they’ve stolen one of my best resources … and then they expect me to back down
and not offer assistance.’
‘Why exactly is that, sir?’ Talbot smiled, amused by Bailey
referring to him as a top resource. He placed the drink in front of him.
‘Digging. Christ, you’re allowed to go digging,
unofficially, but it appears that anything I do leaves a footprint they’re not
keen on shadowing.’
‘Odd, isn’t it.’ Talbot nonchalantly lit a cigarette.
‘Weissman was correct in his prediction that being a lone dog wouldn’t be much
fun …’ He leant very close to Bailey, tried not to grin, and said in a hushed
whisper, ‘Of course, sir, you’ve been behind a desk a while now; I guess you
wouldn’t be much interested in offering a little covert assistance.’
‘I never have liked your methods, Jake, never approved.’
Bailey sipped his coffee. ‘What did you have in mind?’
~Meet Toni!~
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D.I.
Jake Talbot is a burnt-out British detective given a second chance to believe
in love, friendship and the transcendent essence of the human experience. When
he investigates a seemingly innocent visitor to a residential care home for the
elderly he uncovers a dangerous family hiding a forbidden romance that
mysteriously crosses the boundaries of time. The deceitful family does all they
can to prevent Talbot from discovering their secrets surrounding an unsolved
murder, family betrayal; at the core of which is a keenly intelligent, though
somewhat mentally challenged young man who is fixated on an elderly woman being
held captive by her own grandson. Talbot sets out to right the many wrongs done
to the blameless, and in turn, rediscovers his own humanity.
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